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    First Chapter Analysis

    Oops. Sorry. How about now? https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aC09zO4UtMSV8cU-sYgO_rIQ3NcemTYUUe2Rzj5dMx0/edit?usp=drivesdk
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    First Chapter Analysis

    I haven't published it yet on ScribbleHub, but I've got a urban fantasy in the works that I'd like to have a second opinion. I mostly write fanfics but I decide to give original work a try, so I put the prologue, plus the first two chapters on drive If you can't or won't read it because it's not...
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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    I haven't published it yet on ScribbleHub, but I've got a urban fantasy in the works that I'd like to have a second opinion. I mostly write fanfics but I decide to give original work a try, so I put the prologue, plus two more chapters on drive...
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    Another AI request thread (Aesthetic ver.)

    Young woman wearing a black bandage that covers her eyes, black medium length hair, honey colored eyes(if the bandage isn't easy to do), slightly tanned, wearing a red overcoat with a hood and a black skirt/white shirt Convo. Some high boots. If you can make some energy around her (or behind)...
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    Help me brainstorm some stuff

    I'm from Peru and the people from the coast cannot live in extreme climates as the weather there is pretty chill and there are no big changes. Like, there's no snow or it isn't that hot (I'm comparing it with Italy, where I currently live). If it's in the middle (vertical - Sierra) of Peru there...
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