Recent content by JomonVale

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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    This is my first story—an atmospheric, melancholic mystery set in a fantasy world. It follows an orphan boy and his cat, Fangtail, as they uncover mysteries within their orphanage. Fair warning: it's quite slow-paced, so it might not be for everyone...
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    Feedback on my 1st story

    I know everyone asks for feedback here, and I hate following trends, but I'm hoping some of you might take a look at my story despite how tedious that can be. I'm struggling with how to categorize it. Is it fantasy? Yes, but it's not about power progression or epic quests. Mystery? Definitely...
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