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    Opposite of Divine

    Well ideally you would name them based on there power source. So for example taoist gods, if they get there power from qi. Or Maybe call them Immortals.
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    Recommendations Novel about Mongolian people or have a setting within Mongolian Empire?

    Well there's Sougen no Okite ~Tsuyoi Yatsu ga Moteru, Ii Buzoku ni Umarekawatta zo. English name Grasslands law. It's japanese originally, and got dropped.
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    Ice Age Creatures in Fantasy Novels

    If your fantasy is based on the idea that our earth had,(or even in secret still has) magic, then earlier sapient variants can be constructed as some kind of magic race. So neanderthals, because they have larger brains can maybe be elves. With earlier homo types being orcs.
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    How old are you all.

    About my age... well... let's just say my story isn't fiction. ?
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    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    Um, different in a bad way, or just different as in different style, which you lack data for?
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    Cortisol

    I'm curious why you decided, to ask this question. I do know what cortisol is.
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    Feedback + suggestions (Closed)

    Please review and give suggestions to my novel. Link in the signature below.
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    Post Your Synopsis & Get Feedback

    Synopsis of my story, Are you looking for a reincarnation story, where the protagonist only gets enough of his previous life's memory's to make him relatable? Do you want him to get his harem through charm (mostly). Do you want his harem and other girls he meets, to have fight's over his...
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    Looking for an artist to do cover for my novel but I am broke so I can't pay (Free)

    Well if you do somehow find someone, then please send him to me afterwards.:s_wink:
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    Being about to be transmigrated, What kind of technology would you take to another world?

    2, With military power you can take whatever you need, (if you have scruples you can protect the innocent in return for resources/go after evil people). Without it, you are just a walking treasure chest, with no way to defend yourself. Also using interstellar travel, you can eventually...
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    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    please rate my story in the signature below.
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    Justifying Character Decisions

    Well if you want to shorten it than you might try, "Really? He's offering that much?!" shouted Sunset. Now skip the thoughts, Then if it's actually a trap have him say something like " I knew this was too good to be true", during the battle. You can also have his partner berate him, for being a...
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    Dice Test

    !roll 1,6,10
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    Brick is evolving

    Well you could do a few things, you could, A: Have its traits reinforced so it will be sturdier, have more fire resistance, greater weight ect.. B: Have it become more abstract, E.g become the idea of a brick or sturdiness ect.. C: Have it chance into something resembling it, E.g into a...
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    Resolved Precognition?

    I think they mean within. Still they should fix this to remove the ambiguity.
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