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    JayMark reacted to Eldoria's comment on Eldoria's profile post with Like Like.
    The problem with autobiographical stories, MC writes from a 'future' perspective where he is 'safe' to tell his story to the readers...
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    JayMark commented on Eldoria's profile post.
    Devils advocate from a out of spectrum writer who thinks the very concept of a main character is over depended on: don't readers assume...
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    JayMark reacted to Zagaroth's post in the thread Dumbest Comments You've Gotten with Like Like.
    Over on RR, I had this guy try to rip into my story in the comments, except everything he said was a gross mischaracterization. Like...
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    JayMark reacted to onehunter's post in the thread Dumbest Comments You've Gotten with Haha Haha.
    I had one that broke my brain. The synopsis says the MC wants to be a good cook. The reader commented something like, "I didn't realize...
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    JayMark reacted to MC-Stories's post in the thread Dumbest Comments You've Gotten with Sad Sad.
    TBH, i have never gotten a single review for any of my works, a comment or two, but i doubt they were written by humans anymore...
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    JayMark reacted to Assurbanipal_II's post on Eldoria's profile with Like Like.
    :blob_aww: Do not fret, the Odyssey, one of the greatest literary works of Western culture, also looks back at what had happened.
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    JayMark reacted to Eldoria's comment on Assurbanipal_II's profile post with Like Like.
    What about Boku no Hero?
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    JayMark reacted to Assurbanipal_II's comment on Assurbanipal_II's profile post with Like Like.
    :blob_aww: I am limited to the literary tradition I know.
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    JayMark commented on Eldoria's profile post.
    :unsure:
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    JayMark commented on Eldoria's profile post.
    Nor should it kill the suspense. It feels like a hollow assesement This can be argued with any story where the main character has plot...
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    JayMark commented on Eldoria's profile post.
    Oh, btw, I don't think such a structure merits any demotion in quality perception whatsoever. It can be done really well. I just don't...
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    JayMark commented on Assurbanipal_II's profile post.
    There were so many characters and such scale there were unlimited possible outcomes for what the ending would look like.
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    JayMark commented on Assurbanipal_II's profile post.
    I tend to block out anything that makes a narrative less interesting to me. If you tell me the end, my brain erases it automagically...
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    :blob_reach: As you are a bull and have only limited long term memory, such should be easy to accomplish~.
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