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    Hello I am writing an isekai story and want help with ideas to broden my mind to not be geniric

    I think you should work on your grammar. It hurts reading the prologue and I can't read past your first chapter. I'm not asking for a perfect grammar, but a readable grammar + sentence structure. That is the minimum you need when writing a story.
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    How to write transitions? Tips for editing my old writing?

    Hey guys, amateur writer here. My concern is that I'm afraid of writing boring stuff. I think my writing can get really boring or my main character has none/bland personality like me. Right now I have free time on my hand and I hope to get back to writing. I wrote a novel 2 years back -...
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    Looking for villain mc or transmigation

    wow it's GWD author:blob_aww:, what a coincidence. wait --did i see an update, i just finished chap 35, now back to reading :blob_nom::blob_nom::blob_cookie:
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    Looking for villain mc or transmigation

    Ayyy, i'll check them out. they're all female protag. im so used to reading male protag. will give them a try, thanks!
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    Looking for villain mc or transmigation

    Something like an anti hero/sadistic/hidden identity villain male protagonist mc would be awesome, i don't mind bl. would appreciate a story with good plot. Currently reading - How to Survive Another World as an Asshole (any recommendation similar to this story would be welcome too!) The...
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