Recent content by JackJohnJackson

Thanks for the feedback and recommendation, will definitely check it out! I think I was too focused on the setup part of the attack more than the actual logistics of it, so good catch. It is a bit tricky to get the key parts of information from it across without going too much of a tell don't...

Much appreciated on the very useful feedback! The first chapters do very much need a cleanup at some point so having the right directions on how to improve them is a massive help in particular. Trimming my purple prose is a goal I continue to work on and am glad that the latest chapter shows...

O' delightfully wise chick of the forums, I humbly offer you this meal of mine and hope that your scrutinous and beady eyes can offer some insight into it. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/912353/stray-stars/

I name my acts after songs that thematically fit them, then write them alongside that artist/genre to keep the general mood the same. Helps with keeping the music thematic tight.

Finding happiness in a flawed world and how much of a fight uphill it can be is the main one, followed by generational trauma and it's trickle-down effects making that fight much harder. Though that also leads into a much broader one of clinging to and idolising the past is a miserable...

Thanks for making this thread, very helpful as a new author to see all these tips in one consistent package.

Depends, kinda split down the middle with the logical side of What, When, Where and How, absolutely would piece together a mystery, she likes puzzles. But on the Why or Who questions, absolutely not, negative social skills and ability to read people, would establish the killer by pure freak...

Hi! I'd love it if you could take a look at my story, it just finished it's first act and has an intermission chapter leading into the next. Any and all feedback or thoughts would be appreciated!

Hi! I'd love to get some feedback on my first chapter, I'm wondering if it's as gripping and interesting for the greater plot as it should be, story in sig

Very happy it made it to the reading list standard, but thank you very much for the feedback and yes definitely hoping to improve on both the cover and chapters over time Thanks for taking the time to give this feedback!

Would very much appreciate the first impressions feedback of my story https://www.scribblehub.com/series/912353/stray-stars/

I haven't gone through and frankly am terrible with coming up with chapter titles but kept with a general older tech aesthetic with disc's for the different parts and track numbers for chapters, the cover is just thrown together too from old art but would very much appreciate the thoughts...