Recent content by Indigodarkchild

Thank you. I'll cut down the paragraphs. Never thought about how it would look mobile-wise. Understood. Adding an updated cover now. Appreciate the feedback again. I had no idea no image would influence who reads the story. Will keep that in mind from here on out. No, he was right. I had no...

I have been working on this story for a while and would love to hear some thoughts on it. Premise is simple. A semi-insert into the Naruto realm through a character that was brainwashed by Danzo. We navigate the world through his memories and see how he places an impact on the Konoha...

Agreed. Your experiences shape the way you create. Research is an amazing way to learn about how other cultures operate, and it helps the way you interpret the world. We could all use some understanding of different cultures. Especially through reading.

Agreed. You should do back story on each character, that way when ( or if) they meet, we have an understanding on who they are.