Recent content by ImmortalBard

Thank you so much for your review! I have to agree with you about the info-dump and the repetition in Chapter 2. It’s an unfortunate leftover from a rewrite. That said, I was wondering: did the fact that so many questions were raised without being answered right away take away from your...

Hahaha, ain't no way you tried to audiobook the bible. ??? When I struggle with traditional reading I like audiobooks, because I can do other stuff, like cleaning or commuting while still having your brain occupied. But no joke why would you listen to the bible, looking at your username I...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1596120/roots-of-power/ Thank you for checking it out!

Genre: Fantasy, Mystery, Action URL: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1596120/roots-of-power/ Feedback Level: 2 Other: It might look like cultivation on the surface but is more akin to SS, If I were to describe it using other novels I would call it a mix of SS and LotM. I don't think I hit...

Haha thanks for that. Maybe it is Feng Shui. However I don't think the grammar is wrong, it just sounds off for a moment. The reason I leave it like that is because it sounds "quicker" so to say. But still thanks for replying and I wonder if audiobooks could be your thing?

Hello, I would love for you to check it out. Based on your other replies, I am happy if you make it past the first paragraph. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1596120-roots-of-power/chapter/1596622/