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wow this is soo much detailed that im shocked and happy at same time. Thank you for spending time from your precious day to view it...

I just did a low to medium edit to ch1. If you are still interested on checking it out. What I focused on: I tried to adding more...

oh? so you suggest to redraft it instead? I honestly though i should leave it as is as to not confused others but I believe redrafting...

Great! thats exactly what i wanted tbh. As I said Im very novice as an author (Literally the most i did was translating two novels lol)...

Hi! So I've been studying the first chapter. And there's a ton you do really well. You know how to concisely use language. You show...

Hello I'm a new author here, and I’d really love some feedback on my story. Thanks

Im writing a cultivation novel with a system. Can someone give me some feedback on it? I have written upto chapter 97 but publicly only...