Recent content by Hopper50

Hey, I'm looking for a beta reader for my first-ever sci-fi story. I want honest criticism of my main character, lore, and world-building. Be warned that the story includes graphic violence. Link: Neosis

But she looked into your eyes And saw what lay beneath Don't try to save yourself The circle is complete In reaching out and into you Nothing else can touch me Soaking through Hold your colours against the wall When they take everything away Hold your colours against the wall With me (soaking...