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    Could someone give me feedback on my first two chapters?

    Is it better now?
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    Could someone give me feedback on my first two chapters?

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/386888/the-changed--a-system-apolycalyse-litrpg/ If someone could give me feedback on my book that would be amazing. Thx in advance.
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