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Cheers. Thank you for the kind words. And yes both tags are correct.

Skipped. The synopsis is solid. It has a plot and a hook. But pairing a male protagonist with a Girls’ Love tag is… well, cheeky of...

O magnifique one. Wouldst though grace this mere mortal with some of your wisdom...

Perhaps I have a different reading style idk. If I was approaching the chapter as an editor I'd go over it more than once and collate my...

A reader wouldn't think like that though. He would take in the chapter as a whole unless something really egregious stood out to him. A...

I prefer writing my comments as I go as it gives an author an idea of my impressions as a reader progressing through the story. But feel...

I'm Hayley. As a seasoned editor with 16 years of experience in publishing, I'd love to offer my service as a hobby. I've worked with...

I think writing notes of your observations is fine but it's best to do that for a second run through as you then are concentrating on...

My queer ass loves this I'm confused about the transition between flashback/exposition and what's happening now Is this wispy spirit...

Heyo maestro, may I interest you in a tasty snack. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1667370/creature-feature/stats/

Cheers, I'll take that criticism with a stiff upper lip. Much obliged. PS: Yes a sort of dreamscape meeting aspects of the self. Just...

I made it about ⅔ through and gave up. I really liked the beginning. You painted the scene very well. I felt like I was in the world...

O mighty one, could you kindly spare a few minutes to give feedback on the following chapter...

There is no strict format for my feedback, but here is my general approach: I read your synopsis, then I read Chapter 1 until I stop...

O magnifique one. Wouldst though grace this mere mortal with some of your wisdom...