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Cheers. Thank you for the kind words. And yes both tags are correct.
Feb 15, 2026
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Skipped. The synopsis is solid. It has a plot and a hook. But pairing a male protagonist with a Girls’ Love tag is… well, cheeky of...
Feb 15, 2026
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I will give feedback on YOUR horror story, or story with heavy horror themes
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O magnifique one. Wouldst though grace this mere mortal with some of your wisdom...
Feb 14, 2026
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Perhaps I have a different reading style idk. If I was approaching the chapter as an editor I'd go over it more than once and collate my...
Feb 13, 2026
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A reader wouldn't think like that though. He would take in the chapter as a whole unless something really egregious stood out to him. A...
Feb 13, 2026
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I prefer writing my comments as I go as it gives an author an idea of my impressions as a reader progressing through the story. But feel...
Feb 13, 2026
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I'm Hayley. As a seasoned editor with 16 years of experience in publishing, I'd love to offer my service as a hobby. I've worked with...
Feb 13, 2026
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I think writing notes of your observations is fine but it's best to do that for a second run through as you then are concentrating on...
Feb 13, 2026
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My queer ass loves this I'm confused about the transition between flashback/exposition and what's happening now Is this wispy spirit...
Feb 13, 2026
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Heyo maestro, may I interest you in a tasty snack. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1667370/creature-feature/stats/
Feb 11, 2026
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Chapter Feedback?
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Cheers, I'll take that criticism with a stiff upper lip. Much obliged. PS: Yes a sort of dreamscape meeting aspects of the self. Just...
Jan 30, 2026
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I made it about ⅔ through and gave up. I really liked the beginning. You painted the scene very well. I felt like I was in the world...
Jan 30, 2026
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O mighty one, could you kindly spare a few minutes to give feedback on the following chapter...
Jan 27, 2026
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There is no strict format for my feedback, but here is my general approach: I read your synopsis, then I read Chapter 1 until I stop...
Jan 27, 2026
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O magnifique one. Wouldst though grace this mere mortal with some of your wisdom...
Jan 27, 2026
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