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    Recommendations Recommend me a Naruto-type novel?

    A novel that has the same contents like Naruto that has a good worldbuiding and storyline that you have in mind?
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Thank you for your feedback. I'm aware that I'm still lacking in writing about the sound and action of what they're attempting, and I'm rewriting some events from the previous paragraph that I've already stated. I believe I have a long way to go given that this is my first published story and...
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    Yet another free feedback thread.

    Hi bro. I only do this because it's just my hobby. Well, it's my very first story, and it only has two chapters for now. My first chapter might have been really bad, but I might have improved in the second chapter. Feel free to check it out and give your thoughts about it if you don't mind...
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    Additional Feedback/Reviews

    Hi bro. I only do this because it's just my hobby. Well, it's my very first story, and it only has two chapters for now. My first chapter might have been really bad, but I might have improved in the second chapter. Feel free to check it out and give your thoughts about it if you don't mind...
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    My Free Feedback Thread

    Hi bro. Well, it's my very first story, and it only has two chapters for now. My first chapter might have been really bad, but I might have improved in the second chapter. Feel free to check it out and give your thoughts about it if you don't mind. You can comment anywhere that you prefer, on...
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Well, it's my very first story, and it only has two chapters for now. My first chapter might have been really bad, but I might have improved in the second chapter. Since it's a First Chapter Feedback, I understand the rules that you made. But feel free to check it out and give your thoughts...
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    How to make a good or at least decent synopsis

    https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/jays-synopsis-formula-will-work-on-your-novel.2379/
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    How do you explain the surroundings?

    the first and the info dump really help. seems like I just need to dump it all. thanks.
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    Do you plan ahead or write as you go?

    As of now, I write as I go to get to the main plot in the future.
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    How do you explain the surroundings?

    How do you explain the place or the surroundings after first seeing them?
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    Any character ideas you have in mind?

    Well, I have so many characters that will be introduced in my story in the future, but I need more characters for Intructors (Jounins/Senseis just like in Naruto). As of now, I have 10 instructors, 8 for those who have their own respective teams and 2 for those who don't. So I need 10 more. If...
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    Any character ideas you have in mind?

    Well, I have so many characters that will be introduced in my story in the future, but I need more characters for Intructors (Jounins/Senseis just like in Naruto). As of now, I have 10 instructors, 8 for those who have their own respective teams and 2 for those who don't. So I need 10 more. If...
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    How can I make my Synopsis/Description more interesting?

    Bro, I'm gonna copy all your comments here. It really makes me smile when someone really acknowledges and understands me from what I want to say and express even if it's just for the synopsis of a novel. Thank you very much, man. You made my day, bro. Followed you and have a great day. Also the...
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    How can I make my Synopsis/Description more interesting?

    Bro, your choice of words is so awesome. Even I can't think of a meaningful expression while telling the synopsis of the story. Also I can't seem to find a word that describes your awesomeness while rewriting my synopsis. You really are a great novelist. It also seems that I need to make it...
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    How can I make my Synopsis/Description more interesting?

    OK, I'll tell you about my MC. He's a university student with brains and brawn that got hit by another person on fire that also got hit by the landing explosion of the meteorite. ======== Here's my current Synopsis as of now. "A child prodigy, Ran Shoku is a 19 year-old university student...
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