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    3 Series/Fictional Pieces of Media That Inspired Your story?

    For both my stories, Trains and Training Wheels and Sixes and Sevens: 1. Timothy Goes To School - Character name, Friendship, School-life 2. The Railway Children - Trains, Siblings, Family-life, Adventure 3. Diary Of A Wimpy Kid - Siblings, Family-life, Adventure, School-life
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    What Good Thing Happened Today?

    I just finished the eighth chapter of my story 'Sixes And Sevens' and I'm particularly proud of a wholesome scene in it where my youngest character Timothy, having just learned how to ride his bike without training wheels, suffers an accident on the street and my protagonist Robin comforts him...
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    ADHD feedback for your chapters

    Here is my submission. I look forward to your comments, suggestions or criticisms. Thank you in advance from a fellow AuDHDer! :) https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1083781/sixes-and-sevens/
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    Chapter Titles and irrational obstinance

    I had fun adding titles to my chapters and tying them into the subject matter in my stories. Book 1, Trains And Training Wheels, best 3: A - The Key To The Lock (Chp11) B - I See London, I See France (Chp10) C - All Change (Chp6) Book 2, Sixes And Sevens, best 3: A - Down North And Up South (Chp...
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    How's everyone?

    I feel kinda bittersweet now. I've been writing about my character Timothy for eighteen years now, and ever since then he's been my little buddy who's still stuck on training wheels. Now I'm going to be writing chapters where he's ditched his training wheels. Feeling like my imaginary little guy...
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    What Good Thing Happened Today?

    I finished the seventh chapter of my novel Sixes and Sevens, after having started it two weeks ago.
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    Offering feedback on the first chapter of your story (No Smut)

    I really appreciate you taking the time to read this, particularly as it is quite a bit longer than most chapters solicited for feedback here on Scribblehub. I have now amended most of the points you mentioned, particularly the repetition. It is something I tend to overlook in editing, so I...
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    Offering feedback on the first chapter of your story (No Smut)

    Here is my submission. I look forward to your comments, suggestions or criticisms. Thank you in advance! :) https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1083781/sixes-and-sevens/
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    Shameless Feedback Thread [OPEN]

    Here is my little work-in-progress. I have 5 chapters completed so far, for a rough total of 30k words. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1083781/sixes-and-sevens/
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    Offering feedback on your first chapter

    Here is my little work-in-progress. I have 6 chapters completed for a rough total of 35k words. Horror it is not, nor really historical (unless you consider the mid 2000s as such), but it is set in the UK. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1083781/sixes-and-sevens/
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    I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it

    Here is my story. Looking forward to hearing back from you. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1083781/sixes-and-sevens/
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    I'll read a couple chapters of your story and give feedback best I can [No Submissions Temporarily (I need to catch up on everyone)]

    Here is my little work-in-progress, I have up to Chapter 5 done so far. I'd love to hear what you think of it. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1083781/sixes-and-sevens/
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    I'm SouthernMaiden, looking to give some Story Feedback while sick with the Flu [Now Closed]

    Here is my submission, I look forward to anything you have to offer... https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1083781/sixes-and-sevens/
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    Story Time with the Meme Lady - A Feedback Thread (submit your stories!)

    Here is my WIP story (five chapters completed so far) and no, it has nothing to do with the brainrot that most kids are parroting nowadays! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1083781/sixes-and-sevens/
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    Funny enough... no. The phrase "I'm all at sixes and sevens" means that you are in a state of confusion, disorder, or disarray. You might feel disorganized, overwhelmed, or unable to cope with a situation. It's a coming-of-age story where the autistic protagonist (12-13 years old) experiences...
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