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    Shameless Feedback Thread [OPEN]

    Here is my little work-in-progress. I have 5 chapters completed so far, for a rough total of 30k words. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1083781/sixes-and-sevens/
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    Offering feedback on your first chapter

    Here is my little work-in-progress. I have 5 chapters completed for a rough total of 30k words. Horror it is not, nor really historical (unless you consider the mid 2000s as such), but it is set in the UK. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1083781/sixes-and-sevens/
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    I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it

    Here is my story. Looking forward to hearing back from you. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1083781/sixes-and-sevens/
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    I'll read a couple chapters of your story and give feedback best I can [No Submissions Temporarily (I need to catch up on everyone)]

    Here is my little work-in-progress, I have up to Chapter 5 done so far. I'd love to hear what you think of it. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1083781/sixes-and-sevens/
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    I'm SouthernMaiden, looking to give some Story Feedback while sick with the Flu [Now Closed]

    Here is my submission, I look forward to anything you have to offer... https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1083781/sixes-and-sevens/
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    Story Time with the Meme Lady - A Feedback Thread (submit your stories!)

    Here is my WIP story (five chapters completed so far) and no, it has nothing to do with the brainrot that most kids are parroting nowadays! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1083781/sixes-and-sevens/
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    Funny enough... no. The phrase "I'm all at sixes and sevens" means that you are in a state of confusion, disorder, or disarray. You might feel disorganized, overwhelmed, or unable to cope with a situation. It's a coming-of-age story where the autistic protagonist (12-13 years old) experiences...
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    Okay... I think I'm ready to submit something to this thread. I have five completed chapters. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1083781/sixes-and-sevens/
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    Another Feedback Thread

    Here is my submission for your thread. It is a sequel to another story that I'm submitting to agents for publication. I have five chapters posted so far. Thank You. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1083781/sixes-and-sevens/
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    What gadgets do you usually use to write novels?

    75% of the time I use my desktop PC. The other 20% of the time I use my laptop (such as when I'm traveling. I've left the last 5% for my smartphone, which is usually just for minor edits and jotting down of ideas/sections that come to me before I go to sleep.
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    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    Hi Gabrielle! You were so kind as to serve your "Au-lait with two sugars" on my incomplete story 'Sixes and Sevens'. Here is the prequel to that story, titled 'Feelings and Fondness'. It is complete with twelve chapters and about 80k words. Again, I would be happy with the same order for...
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    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    I greatly appreciate you pointing this out, and am now in the process of making adjustments to the narration and fixing what you pointed out with the run-on-sentence. It was a bit clunky, I admit. Getting 'bogged down in details and repetitive' is a part of being autistic, especially with...
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    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    Hello Gabrielle! Your thread topic reminds me of Submit-Your-Work on the Absolute Write Water Cooler site, where I used to post frequently up until about a decade ago. Back then I used 'Coffee-au-lait, two sugars' as a request for critique (which meant "I can take a hint, but be nice about it")...
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    My inspiration

    Most people will just see a pair of swim shorts here, but to me this obscure pair of shorts are a symbol of something extraordinary. In the summer of 2005 when I was twelve years old, I saw my seven year old slightly-chubby neighbour (wearing an identical pair) apparently struggling in the pool...
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    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    I appreciate your honesty and willingness to continue with the requests, however I have now deleted my submission from Scribblehub and don't have a suitable replacement to ask critique for.
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