Recent content by Gryphon

I mean, a mix of both? Rarely does anyone have beliefs shaped purely by their own conviction or by someone else's molding. It's usually a mix of the two, and its hard for me to tell what I think truly is my own original beliefs, or brought on by judging other's opinions and fact.

RE: Zero Season 4, allready announced. LETS GOOOOOOO!!!. My favorite arc of all time. I cannot wait. rihgwboi3wbeifinvpwa

My childhood in the flesh. Hopefully he can continue his passion wherever he is now.

It's this one I was going for. I do see the confusion my initial wording can cause, so I'll fix it.

So shorten the sentences and fix up some past tense usage. Honestly, I've never heard or read the word "strode" before, so I wasn't even aware that was the past tense of stride. Does this read better:

As several of you know, I've been working on a story that I hope will get traditionally published. However, I'm still a pretty inexperienced writer and would like to present the best possible version of a story to publishers. So I want some opinions on my prologue, and specifically a few...

Scriptwriter, although I would merely give suggestions or edit certain dialogue or scenes if the need arises. I can write some decent stories, but writing for a book compared to a TV screen is an entirely different ballgame so I'd try and keep it to the professionals as much as possible.

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