Recent content by greyblob

did you read the links i referred to you?

its impossible to give feedback on such a short length of work. this would just be an editing session which is not the purpose of this thread. I skimmed through the first two chapters. this is really similar to ThirstyWater's novel. check the feedback i gave him. I think it'll benefit you. check...

does this have at least 10k words? im going to stress this now for these last 3

I gave feedback on this in your thread no?

youre too young to warn me about sensetive themes

thats the opposite of a hook though I'm doing 3 more and will probably take a break

need a comment on here real quick to stop merging plz https://www.scribblehubforum.com/threads/closed-unreliable-biased-feedback-v3.27831/page-9#post-642197

read up to: Arc II Chapter 7 writing quality is decent and it's easy to read which is probably the biggest note i have on this. characters are distinct. at least the mc. I didn't read enough to form an opinion on the party. info dumping was heavy in act one. skimmed most of it. really big turn...

why

reeks of ai. really hard to focus on anything else.

ai has a distinct smell. it's like chocolate covered shit. looks good until you take a bite. for complete ai written stuff with no human direction its really easy. ai cant focus for shit. everything is going everywhere for ai writing guided by humans, the prose is dogshit. a lot of...