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greyblob replied to the thread [OPEN 0/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3 (read the rules).read up to: Chapter 8: Generational Talent writing quality is decent. very translation-esque. but has an ai-smell about it. I suspect... -
I don't understand that either. Why is it 7 out of 20? Are they number 7 out of 20 sperm that won for that specific ethnic background...
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greyblob replied to the thread Need helpful Criticism ❤️.7/20 jew 13/20 hobogoblin no its weird because you have 2 parents and 2 grandparents and this has to be a fraction of 2. 1/2 1/4 etc...
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greyblob reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Mildly Unreliable Story Feedback [CLOSED] with
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Dude... I wanted to hold back. But sorry... this time, I can't. I agree with @greyblob his feedback on her fiction. His feedback is... -
The same way how I am 7/20 Ashkenaz.
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greyblob replied to the thread Need helpful Criticism ❤️.its just the 7/20. very odd fraction lol
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Seems like we have a veteran reader, here! ❤️ Everything you said was insightful. And it's possible for someone to be half or a quarter...
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Your banner color looked like a color named klein blue
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greyblob replied to the thread [OPEN 0/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3 (read the rules).yeah i can tell bro. ai cover or just stealing a random nerd jp girl will work. boobs will ironically be a bad cover for your novel...
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greyblob reacted to Bimbanana's post in the thread [OPEN 0/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3 (read the rules) with Like.
Dozens of protagonist with 5 POV sitting in 1 arc here ✋ Readers who tap out because your story doesn't focus on MC are never your...
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greyblob reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread [OPEN 0/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3 (read the rules) with Like.
I also use a multiple POV approach. You're not alone.
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greyblob reacted to JayMark's post in the thread [OPEN 0/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3 (read the rules) with Like.
I get the shakes if I'm not switching POV often. The experimental thing I'm writing doesn't help. It does return to Lily for the finale...
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greyblob reacted to Rosica's post in the thread [OPEN 0/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3 (read the rules) with Like.
I'd also add the novel would've been a lot more popular if the novel is released now after Tony nuked all illegal translations from SH...
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greyblob commented on Conqueror_Quack's profile post.sleeping on your back clogs your nose and causes sinus to flow down. bad for breathing among many other negatives. sleep on either...