I lack the mental fortitude to withstand even the slightest critique of my writing. I do know how helpful it is to receive the type of feedback that I've seen here so whenever you get a chance have at it. If my book stops being updated it's either my object permanence made me forget to update...
There ain't really any original stories, just the same letters, tropes, and themes rearranged in a way we hope hits different. It's less about coming up with something new and more about telling it in a way that makes people care.
Also not me posting a response before reading all comments and...
But why stop at a generic term with beast? Why not create the creatures and name them?
If its part of the world why leave them in a basic state of just animals? Bringing them to life makes it feel more realistic and easier to imagine and connect to the storie.
Just started posting The Nexus Chronicles! Only 4 chapters up so far, but more coming soon. A mix of magic, lost technology, and survival in a fractured world. Check it out!
? Read here: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1445214/the-nexus-chronicles/