Recent content by GodsChosenEmperor

Wow...damn I don’t even know what to say to this. It's like a well of knowledge I didn't even know I needed and yet somehow knew already. And it's made simple as well which I appreciate. I appreciate the feedback, and on behalf of all those you've reviewed before me, I want to say you're doing...

Brother I'm not going to lie, I could not make it past chapter 1 because the action dragged and felt too convoluted. Oh let me preface that I'm not a reviewer, just a book enjoyer. So take my opinion not too seriously. By this I mean that some sense of place was lost as the action took place...

Ahhh, now that makes a lot of more sense. Didn't think of it like that before.

Well first off, I'm not a reviewer. I don't know what details to pick at and critique. But what I will do is tell you the things I liked and didn't. Firstly, I liked the source of mystery instantly inserted into the story and the fact that we basically know nothing about this world. So we...

Please, supply me with your wisdom. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1531992/the-turning-point/

If you wouldn't mind elaborating on what you mean by charm? And about the making readers invested part, doesn't that start with a hook, which I realise I don't have as the story would have been a slow burn. Or am I wrong? But thanks for the reply, I'm seeing problems with the presentation if...

Thanks, I didn't even think of that. Dumb, I know. But I appreciate it.

This is my second shot at writing something, and I'd like to think I've improved my writing style. What I'm trying to do is refine it to the best I can and get my own sort of thing. I think ive found that. So I do realize the story has very little worldbuilding or a serious hook that would bait...

Forgiveness my friend

Wow I'm really grateful. I did have the feeling my synopsis was pretty weak, but then at the same time I feel my writing is weak. If you'd noticed, that's why I tried to cram a few specific details when I'd realized I made a mistake but I was just too lazy to rework it all. I'll try and fix it...

Help me pls https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1379362/radiant-morning/

Honestly it's my first time actually trying to write something after all the years I've chosen to day dream instead. Though I know I'm a total noob but I at least thought why not dip my toes and see how wet they get. So If you could do me a favor and give me cold hard criticism that does'nt...

Honestly it's my first time actually trying to write something after all the years I've chosen to day dream instead. Though I know I'm a total noob but I at least thought why not dip my toes and see how wet they get. So If you could do me a favor and give me cold hard criticism that doesn't...