Recent content by Ghostblood

Hello. In my book, I post-poll in the ch. But there sometimes when I want to post more than one of them at once. So that is why I am making this forum. Also to post art for the book. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/75728/silver-coin/

Hi, and thanks for the point outs. For the first problem, I'm not sure how I'm supposed to fix that yet because that was intentional. The character is a monotone character. That doesn't really want to say much of anything, type of person. The book doesn't necessarily follow one person as a...

Too many authors lack a solid hook. However, you really need an editor or you need to be able to go through all your stuff and fix it. Can you tell want do you mean? I'd like a clear detail about what you mean.

I see. I'll get to that when I can. Thanks for the input!! infodump, takes to long even for me. I like to say what I want the reader to know when they need to know it.

Looking for tips or any advice to make my book better. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/75728/silver-coin/

I feel the same way. Sure you can go on and on, but at the same time you got to cut it for that chapter, or there's no end. Cliffhangers are not always on purpose, just end up that way.

I have got around to reading this book yet, but if you really want this type of book made. We can all way work together make something. I Love world making book with awesome characters.