The title is connected to the story strongly; it just didn't make an appearance yet. And the betrayal was supposed to be after getting isekai'd. Though, I may remove it since it will not be present anymore. I'm planning to write a complete draft first, then revise it and publish it along the way.
Hey there!
So far, this is my first novel. It needs a lot of work and sure there are a lot of mistakes.
Any constructive criticism is welcome and helping through linking an article or any media form that can help with improving is really appreciated.
Thanks in advance everyone!
you bet. but after all, it's what I asked for and criticism is the way to improve. if you have time could you please specify more about the mistakes? here or in PMs, so I don't end up making them again
Thanks for offering feedback!
I'm new to the craft in general, but here is my story:
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/506141/the-book-of-all-books/
Edit: You can share your feedback anywhere, it doesn't matter