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GGearMagical reacted to ElijahRyne's post in the thread Potential cover for new story, advice is appreciated. with
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Not much more to say than that, below is the potential cover. The story is a WIP, but here is the link to what I currently have... -
GGearMagical reacted to L1aei's post in the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters) with Like.
О боже, это огромная стена текста. :sweating_profusely: Слушай, @GearMagical , @Nihilun попросил прямую и честную критику, поэтому...
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GGearMagical reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters) with Like.
Well, enough. I understand your limitations. Almost everyone ever makes mistakes and learns to improve, which is proof of being human...
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GGearMagical reacted to Akkizakura's post in the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters) with Like.
Mine would get the thread nuked.
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GGearMagical reacted to Makimaam's post in the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters) with Like.
I hate to break it to you, but Eldoria’s feedback is actually quite generous and detailed. Mine would just be: This is where I stop...
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GGearMagical replied to the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters).It is very sad that you thought that way. Perhaps it is related to the fact that I do not know English and I have dyslexia. I think I...
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GGearMagical replied to the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters).I'm sorry, I really didn't want to offend you! I said what I thought, but I didn't accuse you. I was on a site where they are very...
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GGearMagical reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters) with Like.
It's right. But I agree with his statement: As a author... I've also faced this dilemma. I even had to rewrite over 50 early chapters...
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GGearMagical replied to the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters).I'm sorry, perhaps I have been thinking too much about internet advertising theories. I could write about that here, but I think this is...
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GGearMagical reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters) with Like.
Well, reading my chapter is an option, not a requirement. It's easier to demonstrate a concrete example than to theorize abstractly. In...
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GGearMagical reacted to Louhi's post in the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters) with Haha.
This is Macha being gentle. You don't want to know what she can do if she is actually being cruel. She make Tempokai sound nice...
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GGearMagical replied to the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters).I have a feeling that you are being cruel to him? He is a beginner; he doesn't know! You can scare people away like that, do you...
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GGearMagical replied to the thread Would my story do better here than on RR?.I can tell a story. This story will likely not be liked by anyone here, but it is interesting to me. I love artificial intelligence! You...
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GGearMagical reacted to rileykifer's post in the thread Would my story do better here than on RR? with Like.
I think so, but it also doesn't make much sense because, why would bots view things but not leave spam-type comments? (I've gotten a...
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GGearMagical reacted to WriterTrek's post in the thread Would my story do better here than on RR? with Like.
First, why not both? But also, stories like yours can do well on RoyalRoad too, I think. I know Super Supportive does have a LitRPG...