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Is it really wrong to use really, actually, honestly, etc? Or have I been using these words wrong?

So, how about elemental people? Let's say they have characteristics of humans, but instead of flesh, they have bodies of steel. Are they demi human?

What is demihuman? What makes an entity categorized as demihuman? Is demihuman only limited to animals that resemble humans? Or does it depend on the author's will?

Actually, the real story begins after this when she is locked in a dungeon. It was just a setup for her to get there. Thank you so much, kind sir. It's refreshing to have someone talking about it :D

Well, it's like 2 different stories here (the accident and Clara pov about the accident). The important part is just the ending in which mc gain access to the northern region and the process doesn't really matter (kinda. Maybe?) But for world building aspect, that is quite interesting because...

Thank you for your review. Yeah, when I write this story, what I want to make is a protagonist that doesn't sound like a "protagonist." But maybe this time it was my mistake here. When I first wrote it, there were so many holes there. (Somehow she gained access to pass the north gate and...

Thank you :D

Hey, what about mine? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/330367/claras-journey/

Thank you for the feedback. Though I am still confused about how to tighten the synopsis. Well, I will rearrange that.

This is mine. What do you think about it? Title : Clara's Journey Synopsis : "Isn't it better if I had never been born if my life is just full of suffering?" Clara was born with a weak constitution. For most of her life, she lived in a beautiful cage called home. As if her suffering wasn't...

Thank you for your feedback. I will adjust the issues.

Can you read mine? https://www.scribblehub.com/read/330367-claras-journey/chapter/330371/

Can you read mine? https://www.scribblehub.com/read/330367-claras-journey/chapter/330371/

Thank you kind sir.

Help me, please. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/330367-claras-journey/chapter/330371/