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Keep combat scenes clear, concise, and intense use short sentences for fast pacing. Show, don’t tell by demonstrating skill through actions, not exposition. Engage the senses (sounds of clashing steel, the sting of a wound).

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Looking for Feedback on My Novel – I Am the Last of My Kind Hey everyone! I just released my latest novel, I Am the Last of My Kind, andd would love some honest feedback and critique to help me improve. I’m especially looking for thoughts on pacing, character depth, and overall engagement...