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I got my big sister's novel, which she bought some years ago; it's "It Ends with Us" by colon hoover. I didn't read it since I wasn't into romance, so is it a good novel to start with? I never really realised my passion for story writing till some time ago. I always find myself thinking about...

Thanks for the advice, any novel you would suggest which have a simple story but with good writing? My idea is good and unique but people reading it for the first time doesn't know that, they just clicked on it because it sounded interesting to them.I just need grasp their attention in the...

Yes I know, his words may sound bad, but he isn't lying. I have already installed Grammarly on my laptop and I am just looking for a beginner friendly webnovel/LN . I tried the lord of mysteries but a bit too complicated, I just need something with a simpler story but good writing, I would...

I installed Grammarly as you described, and am using 6 or 7 to end a sentence to show suspense or silence, and I am using italic for dialogue to make them easy to distinguish from the other parts, and I am working on the' she says, he thinks' problem, and I bold only words that would catch a...

Thanks for the advice , also you are the first one to properly rate my work and I appriciate it alot

Thanks , any other thing you feel isn't good?

i changed it , is it better?

Thanks I'll try to follow the advice I made some changes, how is it now?

okay ., thxs

I am new writer , I particularly don't know if the way I am writing is correct , I didn't learn it , just used chatgpt to know a normal LN format and tried to emitate it , I welcome all critcism , I don't have anyone I know who would read it so I would be really happy if someone could help me...