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"As the sun settles in the dim lights of evening , we see a fourteen year old boy wearing black pajamas and a dark blue hoodie , Tatami...

I think you are too new to it. Well, first of all start reading good webnovels like SS, LOTM, ORV and all that, you have a very amateur...

Thanks , any other thing you feel isn't good?

i changed it , is it better?

Thanks I'll try to follow the advice I made some changes, how is it now?

okay ., thxs

I am new writer , I particularly don't know if the way I am writing is correct , I didn't learn it , just used chatgpt to know a normal...