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Charles, I think your standard is the standard of normal (classical) fantasy authors. This is a place for webnovels. Nobody, and I...

Maybe go away from webnovels and grab actual novels. When I was your age, I read hundreds of them. Id suggest things specifically...

Actually, that's a European standard, and using italics for dialogue is another international thing, blanking on which country uses it...

Say, how much novels have you read in the past 3 years? Just to see how deep you are in terms of this author stuff. Also, I have only...

First, learn to spell "imitate." Then learn that imitating an imposter (which is essentially what ChatGPT and all the other AI platforms...

Everyone else has given their own criticism here so I won't point out the obvious. But, I'll give you a simple advice to add on. Read a...

I got my big sister's novel, which she bought some years ago; it's "It Ends with Us" by colon hoover. I didn't read it since I wasn't...

Thanks for the advice, any novel you would suggest which have a simple story but with good writing? My idea is good and unique but...

There are many things, so I would advise you to read and write as much as possible so you would get a feel for what is right and all that.

Writing is about studying and practice. FRWriter gave a lot of good suggestions and feedback in a blunt manner, but it is worth taking...

Yes I know, his words may sound bad, but he isn't lying. I have already installed Grammarly on my laptop and I am just looking for a...

Sorry, totally unreadable in my opinion. You need to study basic grammar, maybe download a tool like Grammarly. You comma's are...

I installed Grammarly as you described, and am using 6 or 7 to end a sentence to show suspense or silence, and I am using italic for...

Thanks for the advice , also you are the first one to properly rate my work and I appriciate it alot

Yes sir much better.