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Charles, I think your standard is the standard of normal (classical) fantasy authors. This is a place for webnovels. Nobody, and I...
Jan 17, 2026
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Maybe go away from webnovels and grab actual novels. When I was your age, I read hundreds of them. Id suggest things specifically...
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Actually, that's a European standard, and using italics for dialogue is another international thing, blanking on which country uses it...
Jan 17, 2026
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Say, how much novels have you read in the past 3 years? Just to see how deep you are in terms of this author stuff. Also, I have only...
Jan 17, 2026
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First, learn to spell "imitate." Then learn that imitating an imposter (which is essentially what ChatGPT and all the other AI platforms...
Jan 17, 2026
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Everyone else has given their own criticism here so I won't point out the obvious. But, I'll give you a simple advice to add on. Read a...
Jan 17, 2026
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I got my big sister's novel, which she bought some years ago; it's "It Ends with Us" by colon hoover. I didn't read it since I wasn't...
Jan 17, 2026
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Thanks for the advice, any novel you would suggest which have a simple story but with good writing? My idea is good and unique but...
Jan 16, 2026
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There are many things, so I would advise you to read and write as much as possible so you would get a feel for what is right and all that.
Jan 15, 2026
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Writing is about studying and practice. FRWriter gave a lot of good suggestions and feedback in a blunt manner, but it is worth taking...
Jan 15, 2026
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Yes I know, his words may sound bad, but he isn't lying. I have already installed Grammarly on my laptop and I am just looking for a...
Jan 15, 2026
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Sorry, totally unreadable in my opinion. You need to study basic grammar, maybe download a tool like Grammarly. You comma's are...
Jan 15, 2026
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I installed Grammarly as you described, and am using 6 or 7 to end a sentence to show suspense or silence, and I am using italic for...
Jan 15, 2026
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Thanks for the advice , also you are the first one to properly rate my work and I appriciate it alot
Jan 15, 2026
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Yes sir much better.
Jan 15, 2026
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