Recent content by foxtrotter

The acute awareness of one's mortality in the face of absolute power

"Ken, are you sure you're okay...?" "Yes, I'm perfectly fine...!" "You don't need me to come in and help you?" 'Help me with what?!' Ken thought in exasperation. "No, honey, please. I'm completely capable of using the loo by myself." "Well... if you say so..." Hearing Usagi's back...

There are certain words/phrases AI loves to use as well e.g.,: vast expanse of x (eg sky, grass, etc) cacophony tinged with a mixture of x and y (eg sadness, sorrow, etc) whirlwind of x and y (eg emotions, doubt, confusion etc) mischievous/playful glint 4-5 sentence paragraphs throughout (AI...

Synopsis : - I think spend some time to try to edit and improve your synopsis as it's the first thing readers read. Especially if you think you're not getting enough readers. - Fix the grammar errors. Random capitalisation e.g., "In the year "2099", A series of..." - Make it shorter, clearer...

Generally with English, the less words, the better. Makes it more clearer and easy to read. For example, for the title of your novel, perhaps instead of "I have a feeling that something is wrong here" (which is a mouthful), maybe something like "Something is wrong here" might be better --...