As he takes refuge under the shade, conflict brews all around him. I hope you all enjoy it.
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The most efficient way to limit power scalation is making whatever power system you are using serve the story rather than having the story serve the power system. What do I mean by that? Don't make the focus of the story the power gain or the progression on said system. Focus your story on the...
Each one has their own writing style, this style morphs and evolve constantly the more we read other stories and write our own. Some pointers we can give you regarding the points you bring forth:
1- When you are narrating a scene as it is happening any continuous tense is your best friend, try...
Thank you all who have been reading us in the past 4 days, 1k views, even thought it is a small milestone we are really happy you helped us reach it. I hope you all are enjoying our story. Thanks once again.
Inner monologues are one of the best resources to develop a character, it gives the audience a sense of closeness with the character, a motive they can understand beyond simple generic aspirations. Now like any tool in writing it can turn really detrimental if used as an information dump tool...
As a new author I don't know if there is much I can provide but one simple piece of advise I can give you would be punctuation. The lack of punctuation signs can be really jarring as you are not telling the reader how the sentence has to be interpreted or read, specially commas.
People usually...