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    Chapter 10 of Lord of Whispers is out.

    Thank you all who keep reading. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/474643-lord-of-whispers/chapter/485179/
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    Chapter 9 of Lord of Whispers is out.

    Ohh since it is on the signature I didn't want to double post. I will do it in the future, thanks.
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    Chapter 9 of Lord of Whispers is out.

    Feel free to check it out, we think it is an interesting story.
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    Chapter 9 of Lord of Whispers is out.

    As he takes refuge under the shade, conflict brews all around him. I hope you all enjoy it. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/474643-lord-of-whispers/chapter/484170/
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    Chapter 8 of Lord of Whispers is out.

    A new chapter is out, I hope you all enjoy it.
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    Ways to limit power escalation

    The most efficient way to limit power scalation is making whatever power system you are using serve the story rather than having the story serve the power system. What do I mean by that? Don't make the focus of the story the power gain or the progression on said system. Focus your story on the...
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    hey, I need your help here

    Each one has their own writing style, this style morphs and evolve constantly the more we read other stories and write our own. Some pointers we can give you regarding the points you bring forth: 1- When you are narrating a scene as it is happening any continuous tense is your best friend, try...
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    I offer free feedback. (Closed)

    Our novel is in the signature, we appreciate the offer and hope you enjoy it.
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    We just reached 1k views!!

    Thank you all who have been reading us in the past 4 days, 1k views, even thought it is a small milestone we are really happy you helped us reach it. I hope you all are enjoying our story. Thanks once again.
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    Chapter 7 of Lord of Whispers is out.

    New chapter is out, I hope you all enjoy it.
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    The trouble of using inner monologue

    Inner monologues are one of the best resources to develop a character, it gives the audience a sense of closeness with the character, a motive they can understand beyond simple generic aspirations. Now like any tool in writing it can turn really detrimental if used as an information dump tool...
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    OC Smash or Pass

    "To fight for something I don't understand, to train constantly when there is no worthy opponent... that is my life... my father's pride"
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    Chapter 6 of Lord of Whispers is out.

    The continuation of the Galain saga is out. Thanks to everyone who read us and we hope you all enjoy it.
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    Chronomia feedback!

    As a new author I don't know if there is much I can provide but one simple piece of advise I can give you would be punctuation. The lack of punctuation signs can be really jarring as you are not telling the reader how the sentence has to be interpreted or read, specially commas. People usually...
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Hello there, we would really appreciate if you could review our story. Thank you https://www.scribblehub.com/series/474643/lord-of-whispers/
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