Recent content by ForeverEgg

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    Derp?

    I think siren blood and a progressive change is fine, but I would give up on the non-political angle. I mean, I don't know what you consider to be political but I cant see a gender swap story being compelling without there being a distinct difference in the experiences of men and women. If you...
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    Writing I'm looking into writing a Transgender Story; I need advice

    Id recommend building a character drive for the story and lining up plot points to guide that in whatever ways interest you. My first transgender story was about a girl coming to terms with being a girl. Liking the ordinary and mundane aspects as well as the extraordinary. The way I did that...
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    Writing How to write good smuts?

    Lol I have very dialogue heavy smut. My characters are very chatty in bed. Not dirty talk all the time, just communicating. I personally think it can work very well. But yeah porn dialogue smut is a bit absurd. I mean I say that... But I totally lean into it sometimes for comedic effect. It's...
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    Writing How to write good smuts?

    I don't know how to be helpful... I think the biggest help for me is I have a few good friends who beta read for me and give me their feedback and impressions. My smut seems to still be very hit or miss but the important thing to me is that I connect with my own writing because if I'm not...
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