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    Merry Christmas ?

    May this Christmas bring you endless moments of love and laughter.
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    Writing Did I do it wrong?

    I began writing for fun. I just want to write the story in my head. I tend to look for perfection and constant improvement.
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    Writing Did I do it wrong?

    Thanks alot. I'll keep it in mind. Perhaps I'm thinking too much.
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    Writing Did I do it wrong?

    It is a webnovel. Within 8 chapters I introduced the main character, side characters, the world they live in currently, legends, the curse, a little bit of the magic system, and at the end of the chapter 8, their problem. Side characters are so important because they have their own stories...
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    Writing Did I do it wrong?

    Wowww... Thank you so much. It's really helpful. I was so lost and updated the synopsis like 10 times past couple of days. I really struggle with understanding my own writting in a readers perspective. Thanks alot. site allowed me to select up to 8 genres so I did. ? I'll quickly fix it.
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    Writing Did I do it wrong?

    Alright. This is my first novel so I lack experience, so I need some advice. First I'll talk about the pros. I have a solid story. I know what I am writing and where the story is heading. It is a dark story weaved by complex characters and their choices. However, it takes time to reach that...
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    Did I make a wrong choice?

    Alright. This is my first novel so I lack experience, so I need some advice. First I'll talk about the pros. I have a solid story. I know what I am writing and where the story is heading. It is a dark story weaved by complex characters and their choices. However, it takes time to reach that...
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    Is it bad? Help Me!!!!

    Alright. Thanks for the advice.
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    Is it bad? Help Me!!!!

    Is it bad? I'll change it. Thank you. You gave me some hope. Do you have any suggestions to fix that problem?
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    Is it bad? Help Me!!!!

    I need heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeelp! This is what I got after 5 days and it's pathetic imho... lol I am new here, so I'm a bit confused right now. Can someone read it and give me an honest feedback? Is it that bad? Link - The Revenant
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    Does SH have a lot of bots?

    That's crazy. I thought this is a scam free space beacuse you know, it's just readers and writers here... ?
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    Does SH have a lot of bots?

    I didn't know it was common here. I made this acount 4 days ago and started posting my story. I got 2 messages from two accounts that no longer exist. What do they expect?
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    Another Feedback Thread

    Thanks alot for doing this. I'd like to hear your thoughts on mine. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2041938/the-revenant/
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    Hi! This is my first story. I need feedback.

    I've already posted six chapters of my novel. It's 10k words and I can't tell wheather it is good or needs improvement. I want to know your opinions. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2041938/the-revenant/
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