Recent content by FirnielMahalayati

Your critique is noted. Though if you are implying that there is some sort of romance between Beth and her adopted brother then you are sorely mistaken. That was not my intent, and never was going to be the case here. Other than that I will be editing these first 2 chapters accordingly.

:3, how goes feedback?

Sorry to ask this, but what ‘page’ are you on in terms of this thread? Apologies ‘3

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1299684/the-cold-between-stars/

Not at all sure if you’d even have time for this, but here’s the link anyways: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1299684/the-cold-between-stars/

That, and I should redo more of it. Just to clarify that Beth is the MC. Which means I’ll redo the speech, just for clarity on my end. Sorry for the late reply tho.

Just wanted to ask if anyone would like to give me feedback on my first chapter. Thanks in advance!

1. Thanks 2. Gonna go and try to get it fixed somehow

It should be in the signature at the bottom, hopefully

Not complaining, just a tad confused

So, I started posting my 1st series in here. And by that I mean porting it over from RR with a few chapters at a time. Thing is, when I put up the first chapter, within about a few hours I had received a 5 star rating. I’m just confused about this, and a don’t think it was warranted at all.

Should I even bother with this given I only have 4 chapters up? here’s the link anyways, just cause Edit for narrative year: 1888 https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1299684/the-cold-between-stars/

Would I even be able to quantify for this, given I only have 3 chapters up so far? still gonna put the link here anyways: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1299684/the-cold-between-stars/