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  1. FirnielMahalayati

    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Your critique is noted. Though if you are implying that there is some sort of romance between Beth and her adopted brother then you are sorely mistaken. That was not my intent, and never was going to be the case here. Other than that I will be editing these first 2 chapters accordingly.
  2. FirnielMahalayati

    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    :3, how goes feedback?
  3. FirnielMahalayati

    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Sorry to ask this, but what ‘page’ are you on in terms of this thread? Apologies ‘3
  4. FirnielMahalayati

    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1299684/the-cold-between-stars/
  5. FirnielMahalayati

    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    Not at all sure if you’d even have time for this, but here’s the link anyways: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1299684/the-cold-between-stars/
  6. FirnielMahalayati

    Anyone mind giving me feedback on my first chapter?

    That, and I should redo more of it. Just to clarify that Beth is the MC. Which means I’ll redo the speech, just for clarity on my end. Sorry for the late reply tho.
  7. FirnielMahalayati

    Anyone mind giving me feedback on my first chapter?

    Just wanted to ask if anyone would like to give me feedback on my first chapter. Thanks in advance!
  8. FirnielMahalayati

    Just a bit confused

    1. Thanks 2. Gonna go and try to get it fixed somehow
  9. FirnielMahalayati

    Just a bit confused

    It should be in the signature at the bottom, hopefully
  10. FirnielMahalayati

    Just a bit confused

    Not complaining, just a tad confused
  11. FirnielMahalayati

    Just a bit confused

    So, I started posting my 1st series in here. And by that I mean porting it over from RR with a few chapters at a time. Thing is, when I put up the first chapter, within about a few hours I had received a 5 star rating. I’m just confused about this, and a don’t think it was warranted at all.
  12. FirnielMahalayati

    Reviewing other stories

    Should I even bother with this given I only have 4 chapters up? here’s the link anyways, just cause Edit for narrative year: 1888 https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1299684/the-cold-between-stars/
  13. FirnielMahalayati

    Free feedback

    Would I even be able to quantify for this, given I only have 3 chapters up so far? still gonna put the link here anyways: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1299684/the-cold-between-stars/
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