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    The Revamped Book Cover

    Oh...okay okay. I make sure i will remember it
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    The Revamped Book Cover

    I see....thanks for your attention. I try take note on that
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    The Revamped Book Cover

    Oh? Why so? I already abandoned this cover and changed it to the second, but thanks for the thought I love the last one! deadly serious love it!
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    The Revamped Book Cover

    I have been on hiatus since last September and barely progress toward my work in writing my story and drawing my art. But during that hiatus too, I found motivation and began to lift up my pen and draw on the tablet, which concludes from my previous Book Cover; FROM THIS; INTO THIS; Does...
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    I'll leave a review on a story of your choice in exchange for some comments on mine.

    I read through one of your books called Lethal Combo. The first and second chapters are great! Not good but great! I won't say nor comment much yet as I am in the process of reading your third chapter while writing this comment. I dropped my link below. Hope you are my first commenter in SH...
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    Would you read further?

    Thanks a lot for your criticism. I appreciate it instead of sulking into a bad mood after reading your comment. I have to admit; that the first chapter was my biggest struggle of all time. I made multiple changes, and yet nothing came to my liking. All I did in the first chapter was to write...
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    Would you read further?

    I sincerely need some advice regarding the creation I've made. It has been a short-term period since I have been serious about creating my fantasy novel. Before I decided to share in every community, including here in SH, it took me a while. I know my mistake in grammar and punctuation, and I...
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    Salty comments on stories

    I've got more responses in SH rather than RR. But salty comment? I categorize it as an honest comment/ review since they express their true feelings about your works. I don't know bout RR since most people's thoughts stated that RR was a hardcore channel. But I'm getting a cold treatment in RR...
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    Action(ish) Genre Feedback/Review Exchange (1st few chapters)

    I truly appreciate that you could give more feedback in the future, as my upcoming chapter will slowly answer the question you've asked below. Maybe that was the problem with my style of bringing in the story. I always like to deliver a mystery, solved one by one as the reader goes through the...
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    Action(ish) Genre Feedback/Review Exchange (1st few chapters)

    I can feel your enthusiasm based on your description of the mono eye. Yes, I agree with you, as mono eyes were the natural-looking mecha. I recognized the pattern immediately when I saw the spike on both his shoulder shields and the leg design, which gave me the similarity of Ginn itself...
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    Action(ish) Genre Feedback/Review Exchange (1st few chapters)

    Illustration on each chapter - Fantastic artwork Storyline - Quite interesting Grammar - I can't say it was wrong. But I had to re-read the sentences a few times before I got to understand what you tried to present to us. I guess that is what we call wordy sentences. I spend some time and read...
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Now, this is great! Allow me to make a short introduction of myself. I'm from Malaysia, and English was my second language. I'm curious as I want to know how my Final Realms will be for you?
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    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    I am literally new in this community. I saw a few of your evaluations for other authors out there. Mind if you give a minute to mine as well? But anyway, let me offer my gratitude for taking your time into our work. I still haven’t grasped how to use the signature, so instead, maybe I’ll just...
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