Hey, man! Thanks for the review I really appreciate it. Let me address the points you raised:
1. Title - You are right, I didn't think of it that way. I should experiment with the title a bit.
2. Power system - I am still unsure whether I should add a power system as the story progresses...
Hello, everyone! This is my first light novel here on SH. It is called Warlord of the Abyss. I was hoping to get some feedback on my novel because it would really help improve the quality of the story. It is kinda like a sci-fi game of thrones with a sprinkle of lovecraft. The novel summary...