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EESBarreto replied to the thread Looking for feedback on my cover and blurb (Dystopian LitRPG).Thanks so much for the detailed feedback! Actually, I do use first-person POV in Resonance Law. It helps with the mystery and immersion...
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EESBarreto reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Looking for feedback on my cover and blurb (Dystopian LitRPG) with
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Great, your fiction is on the right track. The engagement stats are quite good for a fiction with fewer than 20 chapters. The cover is... -
EESBarreto posted the thread Looking for feedback on my cover and blurb (Dystopian LitRPG) in Story Feedback.Hey everyone! I'm looking for honest feedback on my cover for my serial Resonance Law (dystopian LitRPG). Does the cover grab your...
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EESBarreto replied to the thread Would You Keep Reading?.Nice to hear it sounds interesting even if you usually don’t like LitRPG. If you ever try it, any feedback is super welcome. Thanks for...
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EThe kind that make you read the book, Nyaa.
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EWhat kind of feedback do you want? I checked SH and RR, your engagement isn't good. This might be a classic problem, story packaging...
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ELet's assume English isn't your first language. Using the Butler to assist with translation is fine. Just don't let the Butler replace...
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EOverusing drugs and doing virgin cringe RR behaviour at the same time? @Eldoria @Macha @Tempokai roast him. Here is my feedback: Why...
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ESo, chinaland but worse, got it. Sounds neat, I'd actually try reading it even though I find litrpg boring as shit. If I do end up...
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EEver wondered what it's like to live where your every move is tracked and scored? 10 chapters in. Dystopian surveillance city. LitRPG...