Recent content by Eroningen

Ah, makes sense, was about what I thought it was then. I looked up some more technical details on editing as well, so I think I have a better understanding of line editing, copy editing, etc.

I'll post here to show interest, though I got a job interview offer out of nowhere, so we'll see when/if I manage to get around to it.

This is a bit late, but one thing you could do is just use an image editor and just move it down. I can't remember the exact way it looked, but from memory most of that side was pure black? Thanks a lot! Just having you (and others) give my work honest and generally postive reviews have really...

I write side stories and come up with more worldbuilding. It can become a bit of a problem though, given that sometimes I end up with maybe half of my wordcount or more in stuff I can't really write into the story...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/244053/day-after/ Please be harsh/nitpicky if you have the energy for it :blobthumbsup: I'd like to humbly request you also check chapter 2 since I've been considering merging chapter 1 and 2 and would like to see if that works better or worse. It's fine if...

Uh, good question... The thing is this started as basically a one off smut short story which kind of exploded in my mind and docs into almost 30k words now. I'm just starting on day 2... So I definitely need more character definition and worldbuilding in general, and I should probably try to...

I'll read it over, I might not read all of it right now, seeing as you've posted 40k words compared to my 8k, but I'll go over the first few chapters at least :blobthumbsup: EDIT: And I can do a review swap too, since we're gonna do feedback anyway =) Merged post: Alright, read up and...

Alright, here's my feedback after reading through! Small stuff: Cover art: Aspect ratio is borked in the description view (but it does show up well in the chapter view), so it's really hard to make out what it's supposed to be. Chapter numbers would be nice, helps me keep track where I am in...

Started writing this a few weeks ago: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/244053/day-after/ What I'm looking for in terms of feedback: Could the synopsis be improved in terms of how well it describes the story? (I suck at writing synopses...) Anything in terms of the story itself (grammar...