Recent content by Enlor

yep this is much better reply. Thx for ur reply. Nope, this didnt sound rude lol.

Lol, what I've written isn't good enough but I've asked for critique, not outright discouragement mate. There's a good way to put it. Seems like you need to learn more than I do. [I don't use chatgpt like someone] and yeah, I'm not a native speaker. There's that.

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Enlighten me on what you mean by inferior quality? Yea, it sounded rude afk at the start, but after u mentioned that it isn't your intent, I understood what you meant. But again, my question isn't answered. 'Write for yourself. You decide what you write' - bro, I know that I will decide what to...

It has only 2 chapters buddy... wait till it has 20 chaps ig.

I'm a big fan of LitRPG novels and recently, started a novel called Viking Online. I want some of you to please review it and let me know a few things like: 1. Should I focus more in the game element? 2. How much should I develop the Viking World? Like, do I strictly stick to lore and history...