Can you give feedback for my first book? I'm discovery writing so it's kinda messy but I tried my best to make it readable though not that great since I'm doing this for the first time. I'd love your feedback thank you☺️
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2301587/trials-of-the-constellation/
Hi! I'm ElysPencil and I write my first book as a hobby. Looking for willing people to review my first book. It's messy as I'm discovery writing so forgive the messiness!
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2301587/trials-of-the-constellation/