Recent content by Elsmere

Thank you so much for the feedback. The point of this massive info-dump (which I will definitely try to work on) is to show a couple of things. First off, it's meant to sound exhausting because Cora is the only one really keeping track of her children's cross-continental education while trying...

Duly noted, this particular passage is laid out the way it is to point out that Cora doesn't know much about the city's provisions due to her maternal leave from her husband's side. Again, I can't thank you enough for your interest and support! Do you have any works you'd like for me to look over?

Thank you so much for this, I greatly appreciate the feedback. My goal is to try and make it clear what's going on while also leaving readers to their imagination. Her eyes are indeed changing colors here and this is something that'll come up again (hopefully more clearly. Thank you so much for...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/864849/in-fairytales/ Hey there! I'm looking for some general feedback on my work and some constructive criticism on what could sound better or help the work as a whole. Really I'm looking for some theory-crafting on it along with some general feelings in...

My work is 150k words long but it's being released like a serial so it should be pretty manageable to read through. I'll be releasing it chapter by chapter on Wednesdays, Thursdays, Fridays and Saturdays. I'm really just looking for someone to read through it and talk about it with me! c...