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That's... nah, you are right. That really is a good point. Lenn is the protagonist here, but the grandfather is the one who's dominated...

Trust your judgment over its judgment and don’t allow it to make changes by itself. At least that is what I do.

Bro removed all the quotation mark from my novel.

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The more I use Grammarly, the more I realize how often it hallucinates…

Correct me if you think I am wrong, of course. Often we need two, or more, pairs of eyes to find the best way forward.

I was thinking of reworking the walk to school scene, currently though I think the story is too focused on the grandfather and not...

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If you want feedback, which means you may tell me to shut up if you don't want to hear it, but I do suggest when Lenn walks to school...

I can never tell if I am lingering too long on a scene, or cutting it too short. Often it feels like I am doing both at the same time...

I used Grammar check to correct the grammatical errors in my novel. And guess what? It literally removed all the quotation marks lmao

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I have, but I'm not really a fan of those.

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