Recent content by EldritchPotato

Agreed

Check out any of mine :). Considering your preferences I would recommend the Orca's Serenade.

Thanks, I really appreciate it. Feel free to add that to a proper review if you feel so inclined :blob_okay:

HaHaHA... you could not pry this information from my cold dead tentacles, nice try.

Bah, that lazy idiot never gets anything done. They're just sleeping all the time and they always have their music on full blast. It's exhausting.

I'm flattered but I am also very inedible. Well, that's not entirely true, you could eat me once. It would be an experience to remember... if you could.

This may sound harsh, but I think you need to improve your narrative flow a lot. Your writing feels very choppy and it's written like reading a screenplay rather than watching a movie. It's very robotic. The second sentence of your story is this "He abruptly opened his eyes, his black eyes...

Greetings cousin ?:blob_salute:

The succubus would definitely join for... reasons. The lich, not so much, she would end up having to fight them if anything. They wouldn't even be able to find the mermaid to ask her.

Oh hell yeah, shameless self-promotion. Feel free to read any of mine, whichever sounds most interesting. :)

Glad you liked my story. Sometimes less feedback is more lol. The romance is pretty major in the story but you might still enjoy it considering what else happens. Do let me know what you think if you do read more. :)

Thanks, I really appreciate the feedback. Some of the points you mentioned were intentional on my part, others not so much. I will take things into consideration and update some errors. :)

Ooooo this seems fun, feel free to choose from any in my signature. The Orca's Serenade is still coming out however the other two are completed.

Chickens and feedback?! A perfect combination. Feel free to let the chicken choose from the stories in my signature but maybe try to get it to eat the Orca's Serenade first to see if it likes it. I await the chicken's judgement!