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Not a bad way though, if you're gonna go style over realism, why not just go full badass.

What are some of the (humorous) things you've done or said that friends and family will never let you forget? I met my brothers...

When the law is dead, I become the law. Blood for blood. Forgiveness belongs only to the victims! — Blood Rose Princess

Two. My story is slice of life so it doesn't involve lots of gore, though there are some. But I does involve lots of cuss word, so I...

Mercy to the guilty isn't fine, but what about forgiveness for those requesting it?

Link of your story?

Honestly, causal readers won't care much about these kinds of details as long as you have a consistent internal logic to the story...

I agree, you do you. But let's not lie to ourselves into thinking that trigger warnings are helpful. I think the other warnings help...

That is completely true. No author should be forced to add them; however, I don't see a problem if someone wants to add them for the...

Trigger warnings are some pop psychology that mutated out of Tumblr. It should be ignored. I use the other ones.

...I'm guessing you didn't watch what I said given what I said at the beginning about good predictability and bad predictability...

Good shock value should make the reader feel like, "D*mt it! He did that crazy thing?! I totally missed the hint in the first chapter."...

Ai-chan abhors the word knightess. It assaults Ai-chan's morality. So witch.

I remember seeing that witches in halloween were ugly af, They had long noses, ugly green skin and warts all over. A knightess, at least...

I focused this on the short story, but this touch more into the wider diagnosis. Though I want to go much deeper into what I touched on...