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Eldoria replied to the thread [CLOSED]Need honest feedback on my story (not sugar-coated).The synopsis is too confusing for the reader. Change the synopsis to make it more salesy. You can use the following synopsis formula... -
This is new.
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Basically, the gap between The Hobbit and LOTR.
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Ah, they're milking the franchise.
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It's only sexist if it's wrong... :blobrofl:
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I'm not secretive about my love for dragons.
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Eldoria reacted to OokamiKasumi's post in the thread Writing [Tutorial] Plot Devices: Deus Ex Machina, Chekhov's Gun & Foreshadowing with
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----Original Message---- "What are your thoughts on Good 'Deus Ex Machinas'? I find them hard to pull off realistically in a plot." --... -
even big bad green ones.
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We need more comedians here.
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Eldoria reacted to Rosica's post in the thread Action Feedback (I don't know how to write it) with Haha.
You learned a lot from @Louhi and @MFontana feedbacks. Now you are skilled enough to give a feedback of your own. For the OP, read...
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Eldoria replied to the thread Action Feedback (I don't know how to write it).Here are some practical tips for writing action scenes (especially battles): First, describe the chaotic environment as the atmosphere...
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Eldoria reacted to Parade's post in the thread Action Feedback (I don't know how to write it) with Like.
Hello, so I am currently making a story called Urban Valor, and I need help with how to write Action. I would like to say I am...