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The basic level of reader is the 'listener'. They understand fiction through the explanations of the narrator. For example, children...

If I am understanding this correctly, I take you're on draft 0. You haven't even finished the story? It takes about draft 2-3 to get it...

I'd say do something fresh. If you still want to come back to your original story and revise it, do it after you've written another 2-3...

I've provided detailed feedback here: https://www.scribblehubforum.com/threads/feed-back-on-my-first-story-is-appreciated.27819/

@Eldoria : sorry to summon you, little one. but you might wanna read this synopsis, just saying. call it? My hunch.

We need more magical girls definitely.

Justice will be decided after it is served not before. Actually, I had to ponder that for a minute.

Wait a moment... @RepresentingWrath is a girl? :blob_dizzy: :blob_shock::blob_hmm_two::s_eek:

I leave you with this question before going offline: What's left for justice after the law dies?

Actually, no :blob_sweat: . This is like a far into the future kind of scene from my novel. So maybe in future, if I keep writing, it...

There's nothing I can do for you. Reading and rating are entirely up to the reader's preference. I also won't force myself to read...

I've read OP's chapters and provided some feedback. I'm pretty sure this feedback is accurate and constructive. If OP could follow this...

I read your first chapter fully, and I don’t think your writing is bad at all. In fact, your descriptions and sensory details are quite...

The thing is I purposely don't want too many people to see it so I'll do a profile post on SH -> thread on SH -> thread on NU (?) as...

It's connected to me, yes. It's not a xenforo forum even though it looks like it. I'm just testing some things but I wouldn't call it a...