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Narrating emotions in a varied way is one of the advanced skills in showing. It's quite complex because the author needs to understand...

I have to admit what you said makes sense but I'm having trouble wrapping my head around it. I'm just breaking down my thoughts. So his...

I think i understand, I have a tendency to get flowery when I write and scenes tend to drag, the prologue is how I usually write...

I can read a bad grammar and my brain autocorrects from years of using MTL. However, formatting and syntax is where I draw the line...

It's forbidden by the Great Convention of Obstinately Nice Writers of 1997. It has been put into the creed that trauma-inducing chapters...

The problem isn't your sentence structure, but rather the narrator's voice. The way the information is conveyed is more...

Thanks for your feedback! My train of thought on those narrator's voices were to try and showcase Aren's thoughts/feeling according to...

I can tell you that no matter how good your story is, your synopses doesn't leave a good first impression. The first paragraph tells us...

Good day to you all. I hope you are doing great. My current story...

1. Your poster and title not engaging. 2. Your synopsis also bad. Like okay.... what the heck is malformed? what the heck is elite of...

Dude... I'll be honest with you. Your chapter feels like a choppy cinematic film. As a reader, I had no trouble imagining the scenes in...

Hi, I'm looking for feedback on my latest chapter. Not on the plot/characters but more on the text itself, pacing (Scene-Summary) and if...

You are not the first to say the things I touched become AI. AI learned from me. I have made some threads about it. @Dec also made some...

I've read three of your chapters. My general impression is that your chapters tend to be expository (telling) with the narrator...

Its alright! I mainly reviewed the story through CRT lens and a bit of feminism. I didn't looked at the grammar and sentence structure...