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Please try mine, dude. I'd love to hear a causal reader's opinion. This is a nobledark fiction with a motherhood core (the...

Yeah, the blog post is like 5 years old, so they would have changed up some of their paperwork. But it's good to know what they did in...

I don't think I have something to criticize from your work. Maybe just this one here, from your prologue: How come the door made a...

This is not a bug. There is a bot that remove monetization options from fanfictions. The site no longer support them.

Yeah… that’s the problem with forum feedback. Its a double-edged sword. You’ll run into authors who genuinely respond to help you...

It is not likely to hurt your writing, and may improve it. However, if you are looking for advice there are many free resources online...

By adding in longer and more varied sentences you improve the staccato feel when you do use it. It's the same for the overuse of any...

Thank you for the feedback. I understand that this writing style may not appeal to every reader, and I truly appreciate you pointing out...

oh, hi @Eldoria. Strawberries will be in season soon, dear. Hope you find a little trail of them. Nothing bad could ever come from...

It mostly depends on the chapter, but its usually the POV of the main character or maybe someone else who watches the main character...

My record for the most chapters I've read in SH is 90 chapters marathon. I read @Zinless his fiction before I became an author for my...

why she's in the jar? That's what you have to do, to get her to read your stuff and make edits so your narrative passes all calculus...

I'm not going to criticize you for using AI or writing with a pencil or anything. But consider the reading experience. Saying 'this is...

This. Starting a new book forces people who like your work to find it again. That's how you lose readers.