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I'm sorry to hear about your situation. What I can do here may not be of much help to you, but a little. Ultimately, I leave the writing...

Sis, I may be a 'legend' but that comes from my drawings, not the writing. And I reached to forum peeps whose opinion I trust, but no...

Toughest part. Generating an emotional experience is easier with visual stuff. Just through words... Not impossible but definitely a...

Dude... you're one of the legendary members here. If you reach out to someone or several people on this forum to give feedback, I'm...

That's why asking for feedback is so important. You can use samples. Use representative chapters and ask your respondents. Feedback is...

Here's the situation. I tried editing my work with AI assistance, mainly because I have limited grasp of English literary language and...

Well, as a reader, I don't care if you use AI or not, all I care about is whether your story can provide an emotional experience for me...

The Apocalypse - Lore For this, I'll need to start with the definition of apocalypse. From the ancient Greek; "uncovering, disclosure...

I've plotted at chapters 35-40 for Mentor as the start of Ending Arc (I plotted MENTOR for 50 chapters only), when the War between...

I do like examining the moral decay that apocalypses bring. In fact, that's probably the main reason I'm writing my current fiction...

That depends on who the author is because space marines get absolutely diffed in some stories.

I would rather live in Dayz gone, Mad Max, Dying Light universes than WH40k, unless I were a space marine.

Unless they changed it greatly, the story is both more and less complicated than you state. Ignore the Tyranids and the Necrons, as...

Humans. Enough said. The only explanation I could think off that everything scary happens, humans are involved. Humans are always...

Pretty good question! In my fiction Stranded on the Southern Continent, putting it simply: Part 1 - Human Supremacist Empire: There...