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My little suggestion: You can narrate the dialogue more naturally by minimizing dialogue tags (explanations related to the context of...

Yeah, I understand that now. I just tried to read it from the reader's perspective and understood what you said.

Sigh, fine... You may hit me and my hollywood-esque treatment anytime you want

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@Eldoria One of these day's you'll finally guess the right gender. lol and-

Dude... I would understand that (the atmosphere in the previous chapter) if your fiction was written on white paper. But your fiction is...

I've only read snippets of chapters in this thread... why do you always open chapters with characters? This is very susceptible to white...

Dont worry, its merit by progress. More chapters you have, the more you know what suit you and the majority of your readers. (said...

Yeah, tis really difficult and I'm susceptible to burn out. Like @TheKillingAlice said, I think taking a while to edit will benefit me...

So, I'm nowhere near an artist, when it comes to drawing. I won't pretend I have never learned anything about the craft, but because of...

I agree! MUAHAHAHAHAHA!

Especially when YOU ARE writing for one semester about economic management to earn bachelor degree within one year! MUAHAHAHAHA! On...

:blob_evil: I've never done Fanservice in my life. Because I've never had fans to service.💕 :blobrofl: lol

Writing management? :blob_shock: :blob_dizzy: This is a very broad question, like asking about economic management. It might take a...

One indicator of successful characterization is when readers can recognize who the speaking character is based on their unique voice...