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As a causal reader, I can understand the course of the fight. But I don't feel the tension. Why? Because your narrator explains how the...

Opinions? LMK if there's lacking... or I overdid it. Thanks in advance!

As a casual reader and mainly in chinese, the above example does sound fine. Straight to the point. Though "a devastating blow" and...

The relationship between author, fiction, and reader is like a symbolic contract. The author provides a narrative to the reader. Readers...

I was a little late with my updates, lol

Speaking as a writer, for both book and chapters, as long as they NEED to be to feel right. Speaking as a reader, chapters should be...

What do you mean length of chapter? The word count? Ideal is 1k to 2k, but I find it difficult to write in those counts, so my regular...

Ah, you're a regional neighbor. Well, like all others say here, think why you write, and base your motivation from there. The hobby we...

Thanks, ig i stop taking every single feedback seriously. No, no, I am from a land with tons of spices.

I would really love to have this tag...

You need to filter feedback more selectively, dude. You can differentiate between taste criticism (whether I liked this story or not)...

Alright. So you want to show off your world and story while also fixing your attention span, but you included fixing your story too...

Since I love using onomatopoeia as an audio sensory effect in narration... I support this feature.

Why do I lobby for an OELN tag? Original English Light Novels (OELN) have come to refer to those stories inspired by the Japanese Light...

1. All books suffer diminishing returns, as people check it out and choose to read. 2. Burnout can happen at anytime, either quit, or...