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Foreshadowing is the "Ahah!" moment. If readers forgot about the foreshadowing, it has dragged too long. Put it anywhere you want, it's...

You are the author, and depending on your vision/direction for your work, you should be the one who determines how long is your...

That depends on the book. For action ones, the foreshadowing shouldn't be dragged out too much For mystery, the foreshadowing can be...

In my opinion, the subtler the hint, the longer you can wait before actually writing the event. A lot of books that I love have hints...

Dude... don't lie. In "content warning", your fiction clearly contains sexual content. Why do you claim otherwise?

I still like it. It feels "personal" like a person that's there or was there, is telling me at length all about it.

Light novels aren't graphic novels (though many also feature character art inserts between chapters). They're novels that are typically...

Foreshadowing is a creative author's way of engaging readers in predicting the direction of the story. Also, you can use foreshadowing...

Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland and The Famous Five series. I always read them in my school library while waiting for my father to...

21 century Boys The epilogue of the manga 20th Centry boys. In the very end, when the last minor villain was defeated, the characters...

Analogue: A Hate Story Having seen enough love stories, I wondered what a "hate story" would be. I think it did a good job answering...

Using first POV doesn't automatically make it immersive. Often, authors understand POV as simply the pronoun "I am," not the lived...

two things. is a "light novel" what I would have called a 'graphic novel'?? IE, a comic book with prose pages. If so, i once enjoyed the...

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Majority will skip it. Keep it within 2k-3k. But if you are popular and have a reader base, go ahead. There are a few authors who write...